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Out of This World-Chapter 1

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It was a peaceful winter night in Happy Tree Town. Sniffles was looking through his telescope in-front of an open window on his house. Pablo and Edward were standing behind Sniffles, asking him what he saw. While he was telling them what he saw, he was interrupted by the sight of some strange object falling from the sky.

"Hey guys, take a look at this" said Sniffles. Pablo looked through the telescope and saw the same strange object that Sniffles saw. Then Edward took a look and saw it as well. "What is that thing Sniffles?" Asked Edward. "Yeah. What is it?" asked Pablo. "I'm not sure." said Sniffles. He couldn't believe he said that since he knows alot of things. Pablo and Edward also thought it was sorta weird that he said it. "I've never seen something like that before." Sniffles said.

The lights began to flicker, the T.V turned on and off, all the electrical wiring in the house went crazy. "Hey! What's going on?" Pablo said nervously. The telephone rang. Sniffles picked up the phone and said "Yes... Hello? Hello? Hello? Anyone there?" Someone answered, but it was in some strange language. "They're answering but I don't understand or recognize the language." Sniffles said. He hung up the phone. Pablo, Edward and Sniffles were very confused why someone who may be from a foreign land would call someone who doesn't speak their language.

But then, a lamp was flickering it's light really fast. Pablo Edward and Sniffles watched as the light bulb in the lamp flickered faster and faster and faster and faster until the light exploded. The trio ducked as the broken glass went flying across the room. The phone rang again. Sniffles picked it up and hoped who was calling could speak english. "Hello?" Sniffles said. "Uh... Sniffles, I uh..." Said Cuddles on the phone.

"Cuddles? Is that you?" Asked Sniffles. "Yes." Said Cuddles. He continued what he was going to say. "Uh... All the electricity in my house is going crazy. Is this happening in your house too?" "Yeah, it is." said Sniffles.

"Uh, I know what I'm about to ask you may not be related to the electrical problem but, did you see some strange object in the sky?" Asked Sniffles. "Yeah. I did." said Cuddles. "Do you think it may be the cause of this?" Asked Cuddles. "Well, I guess so." said Sniffles.

Then Sniffles heard some static on the phone. So did Cuddles. "Hey Cuddles, do you hear static?" Asked Sniffles. "I sure do." Replied Cuddles. Then he said "I sure hear a lot of stat-" Sniffles couldn't hear the rest.

The signal somehow broke-up. Sniffles looked at the window and saw that the object in the sky was heading straight for his house. Pablo and Edward saw it too. "That thing is closing in fast! I think we better run." Said Sniffles. "And fast!" Said Pablo. The trio rushed out of the house as fast as they could. They ran far from the house and watched as the falling object crashed into it.

There was a large fiery explosion, but strangely the fire died down. Then Sniffles, Pablo and Edward slowly and cautiously walked up to the fallen object. Surrounding it was a huge cloud of fog. As the fog faded away the trio saw that the object is silver, saucer shaped, and had green and amber lights on it.

"Hey Sniffles... Is that what I think it is?" whispered Edward. "Well it looks a little too real to deny, so perhaps it is." Whispered Sniffles. "So that means it probably is an alien spacecraft?" Whispered Pablo. "It would appear so." Whispered Sniffles.

A door on the Spacecraft opened and some strange green figure stepped out clumsily. Pablo and Edward stepped back a few inches while Sniffles adjusted his glasses. "We...We...We have a visitor." whispered Edward. Then the alien lost its balance and fell to the ground.
To be continued...

Sniffles and Cuddles are from Mondo Media
Pablo the Platypus and Edward the Echidna are from me [link] [link]
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Veridiann's avatar
Good start, but whenever a new character talks,start a new paragraph,and have some space in between paragraph.It's kind of hard to read text walls xP